TFCD

I would love some critique on these shots from the other day. It was my first time shooting with a model.

Thank you.

Why does she look so angry?

I like the colors combination and the DOF of these pictures. What is that background? It works very well with the scarf.

I am not too thrilled with the lighting. They all look a bit flat to me. Did you use an on-camera flash? In #3 it looks like the flash was off the camera, but I can't figure it out from the catch lights.

The composition is not to my taste. (Personal Opinion Only) I would have preferred for her eyes to be just a bit higher in the picture. They are too close to the middle of the shot, making for a boring "center horizon".

These are just my opinions, and I would love to see some more feedback from others.
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